A couple stylistic changes; I kind of figured out why my faces looked so weird (other than not being a good artist in general). First, the pupils were all black, which blended in with the outlines, making everybody look like they were high as the troposphere. Colored pupils help with that, though I’m not sure if it’s going to work with lighter colours. Second… Eyebrows… Seriously, eyebrows improved so much.
Although, she does kinda look like a dude…